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01 November 2008 @ 10:34 am
Amazed - Callica fanfiction...  

TITLE: Amazed
AUTHOR: [info]x0xmarie0x0
RATING: PG-13
PAIRING: Callie/Erica
SUMMARY: When a song is playing at the radio... Erica POV
SPOILER: Between ''Brave New World'' & ''There's no 'I' inTeam'' (maybe just before their first scene in ''TnIiT'')
DISCLAIMER: I don't own nothing...
This is my first fic in english and the first time I write this pairing...

*Thank you [info]fuzzyshy for the beta''ing''...I love you Sweetheart !!*

This fanfic is made for the comm's event on

[info]erica_callie . The song is ''Amazed'' from ''Lonestar''.

 

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I still don't know how I let it happen to me. For the first time since, I don't remember when, I let someone see who I was, be a part of my life, be my life actually.

 

It's maybe her 100 megawatt smile that captures my attention but now, she just amazed me. Callie Torres is the girl, you know, the one that is often misunderstood but so loveable. The one that when she comes in your life it's hard to let her go. The one that just want to be loved but is so scared to let it happen. The one I love...

 

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I don't know how you do what you do
I'm so in love with you
It just keeps getting better
I want to spend the rest of my life
With you by my side
Forever and ever
Every little thing that you do
Baby, I'm amazed by you
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''What are you thinking about Erica ?'' Her voice got my attention back to were I am, Callie is driving me home because my stupid car just didn't want to start and she didn't want me to take a cab.

 

''Nothing... I was just listening to the song...''

 

''You like that song ?''

 

''Who doesn't ?'' She smiles at me.

 

''Is Erica Hahn a.k.a Athila the Hahn a romantic ?'' I don't think she knows how it makes me feel good when she's like this. For the first time since... Montgomery's visit, she seems to be 100% comfortable with me.

 

''Well, do you think I'm romantic ?''

 

''Oh yeah !'' She winks at me, stops talking and turns her head to see the road in front of her.

 

She really doesn't know what she's doing to me, how she makes me feel when she's around me. And THAT song is gonna kill me, I can't put it out of my head.

 

''Erica...'' She's not looking at me, but the way she whispered my name makes the butterfly on my belly go crazy.

 

''Yeah ?'' She turns her gaze to me for a split second before returning it back to the road and taking a long breath.

 

''What are you expecting from me? I mean, I am acting weird. I'm freaking out and I'm so nervous around you, but you seem to take it so well...'' She stops talking, takes another breath and opens her mouth again ''You make me so nervous Erica. You're such a wonderful woman. You are beautiful, intelligent and... it's just that, THAT scares me. You scare me because I don't know what you think and how you feel about it...'' She stops talking again. I wait a little to see if she's gonna say something else or just look at me, but she doesn’t.

 

''You want to know what I expect... from you ?'' I ask.

 

''Yeah...'' I barely hear her.

 

''I...'' I stare at her and gaive her a small smile. ''I just want you to be you, to express yourself, to talk to me and help me figure out how your gorgeous head works...'' A little laugh bursts from her lips. ''Callie, pull over !''

 

''What... why ?'' I can feel the car slow down, but she doesn't seem to do what I ask her.

 

''Because I want to kiss you so fiercely that if I do that and your still driving we are gonna have an accident !'' In a second she puts the flasher on, pulls to our right and stops the car... I can see her breathing faster and her cheeks turning red. ''Are you ok ?''

 

''Hmm hmm...'' She still doesn't look at me.

 

''Are you gonna look at me ?'' I can see a little smile form on her lips and slowly she turns her head in my direction.

 

''Are you gonna kiss me ?'' The sparkles I see illuminating in her eyes are the only things I need to know that she has feelings for me.

 

''No...'' I see the confusion running in her face. ''Callie, I need to know something...'' I just can't help myself and lean foward, I just want to be close to her.

 

''What do you need to know Erica ?'' She whispers closing the distance between us.

 

''Will I be able to see the color of your underwear tonight ?'' My heart is pounding so fast in my chest that it hurts and the feel of her breath on my skin feels so good. Slowly our foreheads are touching and she closes her eyes.

 

''I thought we had agreed for second base.'' I smile and close my eyes.

 

''Well... it doesn't mean I can't see your underwear...'' I feel Callie put one of her hand on my knee, her thumb doing smalls circles when she moves it a little bit higher on my thigh.

 

''Who said that I was wearing any ?'' I open my eyes a little and see that she's smiling.

 

''Will you let me see it by myself ?'' Her eyes open and I can see that they are now a little darker.

 

''Maybe if you're a good girl... who knows...'' She leans back a little and glares at my mouth. ''Gonna kiss me now ?''

 

''If your hand doesn't stop moving, I'll probably do more than kiss you...'' I didn't even finish my sentence when she grabs my head with her other hand. The feel of her lips on mine is so intoxicating, I can't help myself and grab a handful of her hair and crush her mouth harder against mine.

 

''You're such an amazing kisser Dr. Hahn.'' She say between kisses.

 

''You are not bad yourself Dr. Torres.'' Her hand moves from my thigh and grabs the one that I have on her hair.

 

''What are you doing ?'' I whisper when she makes me touch her own thigh, going higher and higher... ''Callie...''

 

''Hmm... you said that you wanted to find out if I was wearing underwear...'' I gasp. ''Like what you feel Erica ?'' Oh my god...

 

''You're gonna kill me !'' She let my hand go and resettles hers on my hip. I just can't move. I don't know what to do... ''What color are they ?'' I move my fingers a little on the fabric.

 

''If you let me take you home, I'll maybe let you see...''

 

Oh yeah, this girl amazed me.

 

 
 
Current Mood: anxious
 
 
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Abi[info]gayfortinafey on November 1st, 2008 03:09 pm (UTC)
Wow! That is a beautiful song and a beautiful fic! XD Good job!
x0xmarie0x0: callica - touch[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 1st, 2008 03:16 pm (UTC)
Thank you, oufff i'm really happy that you like it ! :P
Freckles[info]t2hnike on November 1st, 2008 03:22 pm (UTC)
Me likey :)
x0xmarie0x0[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 1st, 2008 04:39 pm (UTC)
Thank you !!
BurningEden: beautiful cahn[info]burningeden on November 1st, 2008 04:27 pm (UTC)
This is so good.! But I can't see what I'm typing into this box so it may be a big old mess. :)

THANK YOU FOR THIS!!!

I loved it!
x0xmarie0x0: fallen - callica[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 1st, 2008 04:39 pm (UTC)
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I'm so HAPPY you like it... you don't have any idea !!
(yeah I know... that do that to me too... It's driving me crazy sometimes... !)
I <3 U honey !!
fear_no_fate[info]fear_no_fate on November 1st, 2008 05:44 pm (UTC)
Excellent story! I love the playful back-and-forth between them. Now that you've started, we demand more! Lol.
x0xmarie0x0[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 1st, 2008 11:42 pm (UTC)
Thank you *blushing* ..
Yeah... I'll try to write a little more... :P
hahnsvoiceissex[info]hahnsvoiceissex on November 1st, 2008 05:54 pm (UTC)
Very sexy i love it! Good job!
x0xmarie0x0[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 1st, 2008 11:49 pm (UTC)
I love sexy things... :P Thank you !!
Laura[info]shutterloubug on November 1st, 2008 06:21 pm (UTC)
I loved this! I love that song, and it's perfect for them!

And OMG hot!! The underwear thing was awesome!! *fans self*
x0xmarie0x0[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 1st, 2008 11:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you, i'm so happy that you like it...

I'm know for writing ''Hot'' things...(well... when I was till writing...)..
meimuna[info]meimuna on November 1st, 2008 08:03 pm (UTC)
Please, PLEASE, write more!!!
x0xmarie0x0[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 1st, 2008 11:51 pm (UTC)
Yeah, i'll definitely write more.. I'll try... ;)
marciavandecamp[info]marciavandecamp on November 1st, 2008 08:28 pm (UTC)
OMG this is amazing!!!!! I sooooo love it!
x0xmarie0x0[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 2nd, 2008 01:01 am (UTC)
and i'm soooooooooooooooo happy you like it ! ;)
marciavandecamp[info]marciavandecamp on November 2nd, 2008 08:31 am (UTC)
You're welcome =)
sapphic warrior[info]sapphicwarrior on November 1st, 2008 09:03 pm (UTC)
great story! The song is beautiful. I know it in a dance version, but the original version is more beautiful! Loved this story! Please write more Callie/Erica. Can I just ask you a question? How did you attach the music file? I've been wanting to do that for my fics too, but I don't know how.
x0xmarie0x0: lol - callie[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 1st, 2008 11:45 pm (UTC)
Oh my, thank you I,m so happy you like it !! :P

I use this website ; www.muzicons.com It's really simple to use... Go see it...
slburn05[info]slburn05 on November 1st, 2008 10:22 pm (UTC)
i like this a lot. out of curiosity, what is your first language? You write much better in English than I ever could dream of, and it is mine. More please.
x0xmarie0x0: callica 2[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 1st, 2008 11:47 pm (UTC)
My first language is French... *I'm from the province of Quebec...*
But you know I think the fact that I was writing a lot in french a couple of years ago just help me with it... !
Cori: Mc Awesome[info]kagariyuraashua on November 1st, 2008 11:29 pm (UTC)
Loved it! and I finished just as the song ended! Congrats you win a bonus!
x0xmarie0x0: callica-iloveher[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 1st, 2008 11:47 pm (UTC)
Yeah... A bonus !! *smirk*
I'm really happy that you guys like it... it means a lot for me !!
Cori: friends[info]kagariyuraashua on November 2nd, 2008 06:12 am (UTC)
Mhmm nice smirk there. XD

Mhmm it's femmeslash what's not to like? ;)
x0xmarie0x0: lol - callie[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 2nd, 2008 01:50 pm (UTC)
Mhmm it's femmeslash what's not to like? ;)


Oh... soo true !! :P
Cori: Mc Awesome[info]kagariyuraashua on November 3rd, 2008 03:12 am (UTC)
Lol you make icons and write is there anything you can't do? ;P
x0xmarie0x0[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 3rd, 2008 12:38 pm (UTC)
... I can't draw... :P
Cori[info]kagariyuraashua on November 3rd, 2008 10:24 pm (UTC)
Really? =P

I can teach you if I can ever remember how to draw. ;)
x0xmarie0x0: lol - callie[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 3rd, 2008 10:41 pm (UTC)
Yha... I really can't !! :P But hey, if you teach me... maybe i'll be more motivate !! :P
Cori[info]kagariyuraashua on November 4th, 2008 03:09 am (UTC)
Mhmm and i'll he more motivated to remember how.

Anywho maybe you should draw something on your journal and i'll give you some pointers? @__@?
x0xmarie0x0[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 4th, 2008 03:15 am (UTC)
Anywho maybe you should draw something on your journal and i'll give you some pointers? @__@?

Nice try... but don,t think it will ever happen.... lol
Cori: house funny[info]kagariyuraashua on November 4th, 2008 06:22 am (UTC)
Lol. Fine be that way. ;P
thecon12[info]thecon12 on November 1st, 2008 11:45 pm (UTC)
Beautiful song and incredible fic...I hope you write more! This was adorable, flirty and just gorgeous!

Thank you for sharing it.
x0xmarie0x0: callica - touch[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 1st, 2008 11:49 pm (UTC)
*blush*
You don't know how much it means to me that you like it !!
I will definitely try to write more... :D

btw it,s a pleasure to share...
whitelder: Callica-First Time[info]whitelder on November 2nd, 2008 12:41 am (UTC)
Tres magnifique madamoiselle! Thats all the french i really know btw...
x0xmarie0x0[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 2nd, 2008 01:01 am (UTC)
Merci beaucoup... I really appreciate your comment !! ;)
punky_96[info]punky_96 on November 2nd, 2008 05:28 am (UTC)
This amazed me. Such a great scene.
x0xmarie0x0[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 2nd, 2008 01:50 pm (UTC)
Ahah... Thank you !!
fuzzyshy[info]fuzzyshy on November 3rd, 2008 01:49 pm (UTC)
Look at all the comments!!! I am so proud of you honey!! This is a great fic. Write more. I'd be glad to beta again for you.

I LOVE YOU Ms. Writer!!!
x0xmarie0x0[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 3rd, 2008 01:58 pm (UTC)
I,m so sad... I'll not be able to talk to you today ! (I have work to do... :S)

Thank you honey... you don't know how happy I am...
And you, did your muse come back ?
fuzzyshy[info]fuzzyshy on November 3rd, 2008 02:00 pm (UTC)
It has not come back still. =(

Take care hun! Have fun at work. Make sure you answer all the calls. :P
x0xmarie0x0: lol - callie[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 3rd, 2008 02:05 pm (UTC)
*wink* I don't have the calls right now...
I'm working with our client info... (boring) !!
Now... I have to stop talking... lol
musicalfreak86[info]musicalfreak86 on November 5th, 2008 06:55 pm (UTC)
This was excellent! Very cute. I loved it! ^.^
x0xmarie0x0: callica 2[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 5th, 2008 08:09 pm (UTC)
Thank you, this is really what I need to hear right now..,.
hahn4ever[info]hahn4ever on November 9th, 2008 04:00 am (UTC)
Very very nice...you certainly have a way with words..I look forward to more!!
x0xmarie0x0: callica 2[info]x0xmarie0x0 on November 9th, 2008 03:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you for the weet comment !!
sararamirezfan1[info]sararamirezfan1 on December 3rd, 2008 04:08 am (UTC)
love it
 
 

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